Tourist Trap


Cenote Cave in the Yukatan by mattiaverga at

“Are you guys having fun?” the tour guide shouted from above.

The cacophonous response that followed, gave him his answer.

“That’s great,” he yelled back, “because you guys could be stuck down there for a long, long time if your folks delay paying up your ransom.”


264 characters.

Written as a part of Kat Myrman’s Twittering Tales #146 – 23 July 2019.



About anuragbakhshi

At the age of 40, I decided to exit the corporate world, and enter the world of stories as a full-time writer. Wish me luck!
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5 Responses to Tourist Trap

  1. Kat Myrman says:

    Oh wow! I didn’t see that coming. Awesome tale! 😊

  2. Pingback: Twittering Tales # 147 – 30 July 2019 | like mercury colliding...

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