PHOTO PROMPT © Ronda Del Boccio
I lay huddled amongst the bushes, careful not to make the slightest of sounds. Suddenly, a blazing light pierced the darkness.
I froze even further, if that was possible. I could not afford to get caught, not with the loot in my hands.
As he took his next step, I jumped out.
Startled, he fired his gun, and the bullet whizzed past my right ear.
But I was off like lightening, safe with my load of carrots, his plaintive cry still ringing in my ears, “Come back, you wascally wabbit!”
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90 words.
Written as a part of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The challenge is to write a story in 100 words or less, based on the weekly photo prompt. To read many more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.
Note: Struggled a lot on this prompt, not very happy with the final result, but don’t want to break discipline. Trying to write my blog story after a marathon script-writing session was not a great idea in hindsight.
Also, for those unfamiliar with the context of this story, here’s a quick link:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elmer_Fudd
Nyah. What’s up doc?
Ha ha ha
Dear Anurag,
Well, Neil took the words right from under me. Unexpected twist that had me laughing out loud. Ain’t he a stinkah?
Shalom,
Rochelle
Ha ha ha, indeed. Thank you so much Rochelle. Shalom.
Nice piece of misdirection!
Thank you so much Sandra.
I was just waiting for the reveal, didn’t see it coming! 🙂
Thank you so much Iain.
I loved this one! never saw Elmer coming!!
Thank you so much Violet
He’ll never catch him 🙂
I agree 🙂
Ha ha – that took me by surprise – great fun to read!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Thank you so much Susan
That was wonderful! Neil was lucky he was first to respond!
Ha ha ha. Thank you so much Dale
Still smiling, loved it! Poor Elmer Fudd, could never catch that “cwazy wabbit!”
Teehee. Bugs Bunny is a favourite of mine! I enjoyed your tribute to him.
totally unexpected twist. for sure, rabbits have the uncanny ability to evade bullets. 🙂
This measly wabbit must love his carrots to risk his life. I won’t. I would eat a cabbage may be.
This was so much fun, I totally didn’t see it coming. Thanks for the good laugh.
I’m glad the wascally wabbit survived 🙂
Oh, Elmer Fudd! Bugs Bunny! How delightful to have them here 🙂
You had me thinking of Watership Down, loved this piece