Photo prompt courtesy Dale Rogerson
From his position in the Ferris Wheel, Peter could just see her golden hair. It was a good thing that his target was also wearing a red dress, locating her from that height would have been impossible otherwise.
He was close to the top now. He could picture her sweet face in his mind.ย A pity that he was about to do what he HAD to do.
He took careful aim, working out the Physics, taking the air velocity, and the speed and angle of the Ferris Wheel into account.
NOW.
And Peter barfed, straight at his younger sister, Emily.
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100 words.
Written as a part of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
E-ew! Horrible Peter!
Ha ha ha, sorry ๐
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Ten points for accuracy!! hahaha
Thank you so much Violet ๐
Nice piece of misdirection. ๐
Thank you so much Sandra.
He shoots, he scores! That’s some planning went into that ๐
It’s not child’s play, you know!
Clever twist
Thank you so much Neil.
You’ve written your story expertly, starting at a distance from the target, and zooming in, making it personal, and then – the twist! Yeuchh! Beautifully disgusting tale, Anurag.
Thank you so much for your detailed, encouraging feedback Penny ๐
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Good bit of sibling rivalry, brilliantly written and executed!
Thank you so much!
What exactly was Peter trying to do?
He was a small boy who was trying to vomit on his younger sister from the top of a Ferris Wheel!
Dear Anurag,
Here I thought you were going the hitman route. Too funny and all kinds of wrong. Good job.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you so much Rochelle. Shalom.
That ended differently than I expected. Brilliant!
Thank you so much Joanne.
Oh I wasn’t expecting that! Horrible boy! ๐
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Ha ha ha! Sorry ๐
Excellent misdirection, Anurag!!
Thank you so much Dale.
Oh good grief! Poor girl. I hope he is sick to his stomach for WEEKS and WEEKS!
Ha ha ha. Sorry ๐
UGH. I’m ashamed to say I’d prefer if he would have been a hitman.
Ha ha ha, I’m sure his sister would agree ๐
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That is what big brothers do… preparing to be men (alas)
Ha! True that!