Sweet Nothings

Photo prompt courtesy Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

“All these flowers for me?” she cried out, positively drooling.

Heartened by her enthusiastic reception, I waxed eloquent, “Yes, sweetheart, just a small token of my undying love for you.”

She smelt the sweet redolence of one, and sighed, “You are as sweet as nectar.”

“In that case,” I whispered, “I have a question for you. To…”

ZATAAAAAAAAKKKKK!

The next thing I saw was her body splattered on to the dining table.

Ah well, these humans are rather possessive about their flowers, it seems. I just wish they’d allowed me to complete my question, “To bee, or not to bee?”

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100 words.

This groan-inducing story has been written as a part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The objective is to write a short story of 100 words or less, inspired by the weekly photo prompt. To read many more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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About anuragbakhshi

At the age of 40, I decided to exit the corporate world, and enter the world of stories as a full-time writer. Wish me luck!
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35 Responses to Sweet Nothings

  1. Abhijit Ray says:

    Killed another woman with flower! What has gone into you?

  2. Tannille says:

    LMOA… Unexpected. Awesome story.

  3. neilmacdon says:

    Drones, of course, have only one function in bee colonies.

  4. pennygadd51 says:

    I like the way you use an unexpected POV to surprise us!

  5. csheldonblog says:

    I didn’t see that one coming! I had to read it twice x

  6. Iain Kelly says:

    I don’t bee-lieve it, humans just ruin everything!

  7. Dear Anurag,

    A story with a sting attached. Groaning and going…well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  8. plaridel says:

    oops! it didn’t end up with the expected happy ending. 😦

  9. Russell says:

    And that is the question! Very well done!

  10. gahlearner says:

    Heheheh. That’s a good groan. Funny and clever. It’s a clear not-to-bee now.

  11. James McEwan says:

    I am told that insects, particularly bees are a dying by the hundreds – oh dear.
    Your story had that sudden switch which worked well.

  12. Nice switcheroo at the end. It gave me a chuckle.

  13. StuHN says:

    Do be a good bee. This was beeting funny.

  14. A bee-utiful twist. Well done!

  15. Too bad for bees… a story with a sting

  16. michael1148humphris says:

    Different which is great, but I am sad that the bee had to die

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