The Rising Star

Unkil Joe always tell me same thing- Never leave evidense behind.

I always listen to Unkil Joe carefully, I be taking over his bizness after him.

Tonight, Unkil Joe give me big responseebilty.

I kompleted the job even before the time.

I am sure Unkil Jo wud be very happy with me.

I mite get his bizness sooner than I think.

I distroy evidense, all of it.

No one will ever find the lumbre he ask me to cut.

PHOTO PROMPT © Anshu Bhojnagarwala


79 words.

Written as a part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.



About anuragbakhshi

At the age of 40, I decided to exit the corporate world, and enter the world of stories as a full-time writer. Wish me luck!
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39 Responses to The Rising Star

  1. draliman says:

    Ah yes, with brains like that he’ll be running the bizness in no time! Hmm 🙂

  2. Abhijit Ray says:

    What bizness unkil Joe runs? Smuggling of some kind?

  3. neilmacdon says:

    Unkil might have to change his name to kil

  4. Violet Lentz says:

    He might be in for a bit of a suprize when Unkil Joe sees his most recent handy wurk.

  5. Iain Kelly says:

    Unkil Joe is taking advantage I think, but he better be careful!

  6. gahlearner says:

    I needed the laugh, thank you! What fun. And the comments… (wipes tears…)

  7. Deere Aunurag,

    He sowndz like a rokit scientist. You made me laff. Wel dun.



  8. kislaya says:

    I am not sure Unkil Joe will not be pleased to see the destruction of logs when he returns!
    Fun story though.

  9. plaridel says:

    the dumb leading the dumb? highly unlikely. unkil will sift through the ashes and find the evidence. 🙂

  10. Alice Audrey says:

    LOL. I don’t think “I” is cut out for that line of business.

  11. pennygadd51 says:

    Teehee! I think Unkil Joe and his apprentice will have a cold night! A fun idea, Anurag.

  12. That’s some shady business unkil Joe seems to be running, but he’s got a smart apprentice. Good for him!

  13. You’ve got everybody talking like him now! Brilliant!

    Click to read my FriFic tale!

  14. Margaret says:

    Hilarious. Love it.

  15. Sandra says:

    There’s a bright future ahead for him. Or maybe not.

  16. Joy Pixley says:

    Hmm, methinks he’s misinterpreted Unkil Jo’s instructions, and probably not for the first time — uh-oh!

  17. Hmmm and Unkil will be pleazed with the ashes

  18. I think there might be an “oops” warranted. Good story.

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