The Visitor

It had been an arduous journey, and I had faced countless perils to reach here. But now, when I was finally at his house, my courage seemed to have deserted me.

PHOTO PROMPT © Ronda Del Boccio

He was such a big man, and I, so little. Still, he had called me his friend, and invited me to his place. I decided to surprise him an year later, but now, I wasn’t so sure.

Suddenly, the door opened and a woman peeped out, making my decision for me. I puffed out my chest, and in my loudest voice, said, “Excuse me, is Mr. Gulliver home?”


99 words.

Written as a part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The objective is to write a story in 100 words or less, based on the weekly photo prompt. To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

About anuragbakhshi

At the age of 40, I decided to exit the corporate world, and enter the world of stories as a full-time writer. Wish me luck!
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38 Responses to The Visitor

  1. syncwithdeep says:

    Hahhaha.. Cute story.. I loved this

  2. Oh, that was a lovely, surprise ending! Nicely done, Anurag.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

  3. Iain Kelly says:

    Loved Gulliver’s Travels when reading it at University, must look it out again.

  4. Sandra says:

    I hope he’s made welcome, after his journey.

  5. StuHN says:

    Now I want to see the animated movie again.

  6. pennygadd51 says:

    That’s a delightful story, Anurag! An excellent take on the prompt.

  7. Dear Anurag,

    The perfect sequel! I love, love, love this! Bravo!



  8. draliman says:

    “Who said that?” (squish) 🙂

  9. I love how you put a spin on well-known tales! It really must have been a long journey for that guy.

  10. Alice Audrey says:

    I suspect the narrator’s travels were much harder then Mr. Guliver’s.

  11. granonine says:

    Oh, wonderful ending! Completely unexpected. Good one.

  12. jillyfunnell says:

    That’s a lovely refreshing take, Anurag. Well done!

  13. Piyali says:

    Very cute story. Gotta read Gulliver’s Travels again

  14. michael1148humphris says:

    Nicely done, I hope Mr Gulliver sees him. If not it could be nasty.🙂

  15. notestowomen says:

    Cute story. I liked unexpected ending.

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