Run Dale Run

Her face was dripping with sweat, clouding her vision, and her lungs were on fire, but Dale knew she couldn’t afford to slow down, or the men would catch up with her.

Running like crazy, she almost didn’t realize that she had reached the edge of the roof. The next roof was too far away, this was definitely the end of the road for her.

She’d almost lost hope when she saw it- the awning.

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

Without breaking her stride, she leaped towards it, as if she was flying.

This early morning Parkour practice was much more fun than she’d thought!

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100 words.

Written as a part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The objective is to write a story in 100 words or less based on the weekly photo prompt. To read many more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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About anuragbakhshi

At the age of 40, I decided to exit the corporate world, and enter the world of stories as a full-time writer. Wish me luck!
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51 Responses to Run Dale Run

  1. Anagha Yatin says:

    Thought its going to be an edge of the seat thriller…and then it ended on a peppy note of Prakour! Never saw the end coming this way. Wonderful twist at the end!

  2. shivamt25 says:

    Amazing ending! I was thinking it’s going to go bad for her but she will make it I guess.

  3. draliman says:

    I always suspected Dale was a sporty person 🙂 Nice twist.

  4. neilmacdon says:

    Now that’s what I call a twist

  5. James McEwan says:

    Lovely change in direction of thought in this for the reader; from tension and fear for the plight of the character to a sudden realisation of her competitive streak. Made me smile.

  6. Iain Kelly says:

    Ha, I wonder what Dale will make of this! 🙂

  7. pennygadd51 says:

    Nice twist at the end! A good little story.

  8. Dear Anurag,

    Somehow I could see our Dale doing this. 😉 Love the twist at the end.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  9. Alice Audrey says:

    I wish I could do Parkour. I can do a little, but the arthritis and fake joints take all the fun out of it.

  10. Really enjoyed that, what a twist!

  11. StuHN says:

    Well, Dale did give you her roof. The shingle knows.

  12. plaridel says:

    will dale be up to it? what a tale of misdirection. well done. 🙂

  13. Well done. I think Dale may be part of Canada’s secret service….Bond….Dale Bond.

  14. trentpmcd says:

    A lot of fun. I’ll have to come back later and see if Dale has anything to say about her namesake.

  15. How exciting! I expect we’ll see her on TV soon.

  16. granonine says:

    I had to look it up. Thanks for helping learn something new today 🙂

  17. Dale says:

    Hah! Well now that is what I call fun. To be at the heart of a story 😉
    Thanks for making me so exciting!

  18. yarnspinnerr says:

    A racy read with great twist. Lots of fun here.

  19. Jan Morrill says:

    I must admit, I had to look up “Parkour.” When I did, I appreciated the “twist” at the end. (And I had fun imagining Dale in the role.) 🙂

  20. notestowomen says:

    What a great story, packed with action and excitement and then–a neat twist at the end. Enjoyed reading it 🙂

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